My Books Main Conflict

Eric Calhoune's conflict in "Staying Fat for Sarah Byrnes" is his best friend Sarah Byrnes is in the hospital. The conflict is man vs. man because having a best friend in the hospital causes people to pick on Eric.When Eric goes to visit Sarah Byrnes in the hospital, she never talks to him. She sits on the coach and stars out the window, and will not talk to anyone that comes into the room. When Sarah Byrnes dad came to visit her, it made the conflict even more complicated. When Sarah's dad entered the room, Sarah became frightened. As he was talking to Sarah Byrnes, Eric walked in and was listening. When Sarah's dad walked out he said, " if you hear her say anything, tell me." Her dad made the conflict on why Sarah doesn't talk even more complicated. I do not think the characters will solve the problem without harm. I think once her dad finds out she talks to Eric at school, he will make the conflict even more complicated.

-Olivia Gill